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Monday, November 5, 2012

Research Paper Proposal


Kevin Geyer
Jack Hennes
English 191-17
5 November 2012
Research Paper Proposal
For my research paper I plan to talk about informed consent, and the different changes to its policies that were in acted because of or after the HeLa cell incident.  I feel that this is a great topic to talk about, since most of the book revolves around this point in some way.  Also I am sure there will be an adamant amount of sources and information revolving this topic.   Will approach this topic, most likely straight up, going right into it if you will, describing what happened to Henrietta, and then move into how it affected her ad how things have changed for the better.  Some subtopics could include but not limited to: How it helps patients, how it helps doctors, and how it changed the face of medicine and its practice for ever.  My thesis may look something like this; “Ever since this incident with the famous HeLa cells and their previous owner, informed consent has taken a new turn in todays society.”

Monday, October 29, 2012

Berkley Freshmen

I'm not sure how I feel about this article.  Yes what the university is asking is voluntary, and students have the right to deny participation or not, but if they refuse they will be, or think that they will be, seen differently and possibly treated differently by certain administration. More then the students who do participate.  Personally, I feel that testing on humans should be done by voluntary people who have no connection to the institution doing the testing at all.  Any other way I would feel is just unethical.

Friday, October 26, 2012

Research Paper Link

This is article is about informed consent and the process and obligations that are involved with it.  I believe that this article will be very helpful in my research paper because it gives a greater insight into informed consent then the book has, which will allow me to talk more about it. You will find the article here.

Thursday, October 25, 2012

Writing Prompt: Cell Retrieval

If I found out that investigators or researchers took cells from one of my family members without consent I would be flabbergasted! To think that an institution, even if it were for research that would benefit all, would take cells from someone without telling them is not only ethically, but morally wrong.  Not only would I feel surprised, but I would also feel like my family has been violated and taken advantage of.  To find out that a part of the person in your family is still living and growing somewhere, and it would just feel wrong.  I also would attempt at filling a criminal lawsuit against the organization that harvested the cells.  I wouldn't ask for monetary compensation, although I would ask for some sort of justice to be served against the people responsible, to insure that no body else has to go through what I would have had to go through. 

Wednesday, September 26, 2012

Multimodal Rhetorical Analysis Outline


Racial Discrimination at Duncan Doughnuts Outline:

Thesis: How the Author uses logic, emotion, pictures, and credibility to persuade the reader.

  1. Ethos 
    1. How the author uses ethical appeal to help persuade the reader
    2. Discriminating is wrong
    3. Use of it is not acceptable
    4. Legal issues?
  2. Pathos
    1. How the author uses emotion to persuade the reader
    2. Why did they do it?
    3. How does it affect them as people
    4. Hurt the business?
    5. What will happen?
  3. Logos
    1. How the author uses logic to persuade the reader
    2. Discriminating is wrong.
  4. Use of pictures and other types of content
    1. Persuade reader
    2. Change the views on certain ideas
    3. How them smiling in the picture affects the view.

Conclusion: Restate thesis, give a well ended statement.  

Monday, September 10, 2012

Electronic Literacy Paper


Kevin Geyer
Jack Hennes
English 191
4 September 2012
Typing at An Early Age.
“This is the future.”  These were the exact words my dad said to me as he setup our family’s very first computer.  “Your going to be using this more often in your schooling from now on.”  All I could think was yeah right, this? No way that this was even going to compare to writing on a piece of paper.  Anyway, weighing in at 45 pounds and 36 inches tall, this monstrous machine was about to change the way that, we as a family and a society, use text; I just didn't know it yet.  
Looking back now, I never realized that literacy was moving into the electronic stages.  Mainly because the only things computers had on them back then was Internet Explorer 3, and Word Pad; and the only web pages out there were AOL and Yahoo.  Some people must have seen this day coming, but for me I can tell you that it was a huge surprise.  
When I started using the computer to type for the first time it was, for lack of a better phrase, “Interesting.”  As looked down at the keyboard I was very bewildered; the keys on the keyboard seemed, to me, to be out of order.  I was expecting the order to be alphabetical, you know A,B,C,...etc; but to my surprise, it wasn't. By the time all of this is happening, my school has already started putting us into computer classes, so that we can learn to type, use the new Word, and Powerpoint (they must not have cared much for excel), and just become more familiar with computers in general.  While in this class, the instructor taught us how the keyboard is formatted differently then the alphabet is and why.  She called this particular type of keyboard a “QWERTY keyboard.”  She explained that using this type of keyboard would ultimately make us better typists, providing us with the skills to one day be able to type faster then we can write with a pencil.  
Even before we acquired our first computer, I was never one for reading and writing.  I was one of those kids that you would consider to be “illiterate,” granted I was about 6 years old at the time.  Nevertheless, the adaptation of the computer allowed me to increase my literacy skills in a way that would soon expand my knowledge of what it means to be “literate.”  To this day, the only type of text I really enjoy to read are the ones seen on a computer screen, be it in a word document or posted online.  Having access to a computer for the majority of my life has influenced my development in literacy to a development in electronic literacy.  
From the time when AOL was introduced, to the newer Facebook phase; The electronic literacy influence on the world has been consistently growing, slowly taking over most of the text in the globe.  From the standpoint of a developing teen during this age, the need for actual printed text is becoming obsolete.   Today when you are assigned a writing assignment for class, you are specifically told to type it.  They no longer want you to handwrite anything, and due to this, handwriting skills have seen a dramatic drop.  I feel then, from this realization, it is safe to say electronic literacy has greatly changed both the way the world reads and writes. 
Looking back to when I had spent about a month or so using a computer, my dad comes up to me and says; “hows it been going?” “did you master the keyboard yet?”  I mean really, its been a month and he wants to know if I have mastered using a keyboard.  I haven't even yet today mastered the skill of using a keyboard.  Although I must tell you that using the keyboard was a lot easier then I had expected, it is still a challenge, one that has been with me for my life’s entirety.  
When we talk about how electronic literacy has changed the way in which we read and write, there is one aspect that really comes to mind.  Its an 8 letter word, “spelling.”  Back before the world was filled with these wonderful machines people had to learn to spell everything, and if they needed to, they had to look it up in the dictionary.  Now a days with the click of a button you can see the spelling for the words that appear to be, what was the intended word.  I personally know that if it wasn’t for spell check, there would be no way I would make it through my first couple years of high school.  Letting the computer spell for you has led to a huge drift in the academic world.  I am scared to see what would happen to this world, if suddenly all of the electronics went dead, and people had to start writing letters.   Since no one seems to be able to spell correctly without a computer, there wouldn't be a person on this planet that would be able to read those letters.
Now that I take an even closer look at the past, I realize that my dad was correct the whole time.  It was important to learn how to use these miraculous inventions; they are now an important part of todays influence in literacy.  Computers have changed the way that we, as a society, use text.  Especially on a day to day basis, so much that we would actually start to rely on them to get us through our lives.  It is to be hoped that though, we wont be relying to much on them, because the day when we don't have them, we wont have literacy.